Thread:Joanne Maniago/@comment-29570797-20160821000649/@comment-34597974-20160909131429

Solon75 wrote: @RoseyLaly28

Here is a sneak peak:

As her tears were flowing down her face, Chieko slumped in agony. The overwhelming feeling of missing Hiroshi had taken its toll on her. Her eyes were red and extremely sore from all of her crying. The voice of her throat was croaked, mainly due to her loud wailings. Her whole body was sore from the shaking tremors that came from her sorrow. Not being able to eat, Chieko was close to the point of blacking out due to lack of proper nutrition. Her long, black hair was extremely filthy from all of the days she went without a bath. Truth be told, she looked like a street rat.

But Chieko did not care, all she wanted was her brother back. Wiping the tears from her eyes, Chieko reflected upon learning from the Bureau that Hiroshi had probably followed an organization known as SOMBRA for his own better future. While SOMBRA was unheard of to Chieko, it seemed that based on the Bureau's finding's, that it was a criminal organization.

"Great, just great. Hiroshi is with a dangerous group, I may never find him." thought Chieko.

She knew that there was a report on how he was in Seoul, South Korea. But right at the moment, she had no hope of finding him. Rather, the dread of hopelessness crept right into her heart.

So, what do you think so far? Perfect!