Thread:Joanne Maniago/@comment-29570797-20161209201739/@comment-29570797-20170202161941

Joanne Maniago wrote: Solon75 wrote:

Joanne Maniago wrote: Sure. Feel free to alter it. :) Okay, here is what I got:

Mangus: Detective Amit! Thank goodness you're here! I need you help!

Amit: What's the matter, Mangus?

Mangus: Well, I had a bracelet. It was going to be a gift to someone special.

Mangus (While Crying): But it's gone! I have no idea where it is now!

Amit: Don't worry, me and my colleague Marina here will find it for you!

Amit: Now, Mangus, where was the last place you had the bracelet?

Mangus: As far as I can remember, I had it with me in the hotel lobby before losing it!

Amit: Alright then, it's settled! Me and Marina will search that lobby for you, even if the two of us have to tear it apart!

Marina (Looking at Amit worried): Are you serious?!

Amit: Of course I am, except the part about tearing the lobby apart, let's go! It's all good! Really nice dialogue.

P.S. It is Magnus, not Mangus. Oops. My bad.