Thread:Joanne Maniago/@comment-29570797-20161007184306/@comment-29570797-20161110195801

Shooter 01 wrote: Hello, I'm the anon from earlier - I just remembered that I had indeed made an account a long time ago in another wiki.

Honestly, that idea is a well thought one, kudos to you sir. It clearly explains the reason. It's a good idea to have made Amit's parents 14-16 years old during the time they were sent to Auschwitz. They're at the age where they're mature enough to realize the horrors they were undergoing - no childish innocence that can make them change their views or anything. And to have that experience being made known to Amit, and with his compassionate heart, well, it's a good one. Just shows that even the best detectives are humans with a heart. I like the idea of the racist classmates as well; the story hurts but one cannot simply write a story full of rainbows. Experiences change a person's views, and the idea you came up with for Amit's inspiration to be an officer is great.

It's wonderful, clear and interesting. As Joanne said, it's all good. Good job. Thank you, glad you love it. My explanation that I came up I actually thought wasn't going to be enough. Nonetheless, glad to know my idea makes sense now. I also want to make it to where even the Bureau has a heart also.