Thread:Koishi-Komeiji/@comment-29570797-20161125235736/@comment-29570797-20161219183401

Koishi-Komeiji wrote: No, if you want to introduce, give a brief introduction of the character isolated from the story completely. This means nothing related to the story when you're introducing your character to your readers before you complete the actual thing. If not, it is better to introduce your character while the story progresses. That means people learn of your character the more they read your story. The brief introduction may already tell what they do and how they are like, but the story itself will prove that there are more than what meets the eye. Okay, I get what you are saying. In fact, here is the link to my character sheet: http://criminalcasegame.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Solon75/Introducing_Amit_Gideon_Berkowicz

What do you think of my character?