Thread:Joanne Maniago/@comment-29570797-20160821000649/@comment-29570797-20161126142905

Koishi-Komeiji wrote: It's a great introduction to start off with! It can hook your readers into finding out what happened in the flashbacks. Glad you like it! Hopefully, this is a sign that my writing has improved a bit. Say, you have any suggestions for what I could write in the flashbacks?