Thread:Hasuro Haku/@comment-36081877-20181031131140/@comment-34548141-20181031131424

I know that you are trying to help and this is good. But if you want me to point your mistakes. Here:

1. Tense mistakes

2. We will use "It is discovered that he/she....." if it's his/her second suspect appearance :D

But don't worry, they are just small mistakes xD You can improve it