Thread:Tuxedo!/@comment-24576157-20150701034940/@comment-25064703-20150701040940

Well, I mainly reverted your edits for the grammar and the redundancy. Also, I don't really think it to be necessary for every category page to have what it's based on, only the notable/really specific and obvious ones (i.e. Hollywood Hills for Ivywood, Las Vegas for Paradise City, Silicon Valley for Innovation Valley).

For the Pacific Bay page itself, you also deleted some other trivia (and 2 pictures) that were important.