Thread:Joanne Maniago/@comment-29570797-20161007184306/@comment-29570797-20161102030711

@Joanne Maniago

Okay, in your honest opinion, how do you imagine Amit's reaction towards Angela over what she did to Chieko? Here's what I would imagine (As of right now, with the dialogue being subject to change):

(After Chieko leaves)

Amit: No Chieko, come back! Angela didn't mean it!

Angela:  Before you ask, I'm not going to apologize. She shouldn't have harmed my girls!

Amit: You're wrong Angela! Chieko meant no harm. All she did was fire a crossbow and reload it. She did that to help cope with her grief, Angela. She started to tell me that she never even shown them how to handle a crossbow before you came marching in, mad as a fiery woman.

Carmen:  Amit's right, you didn't have to scare Chieko away! She might have been irresponsible, but she's a child, too, and she needed our protection!

Amit (Starts mumbling):  Please be okay....please be okay...

Amit (Starts shrieking): What if Chieko is in danger right now?! She could be hurt, or even killed! OI, Oi, Oi, I am telling you, Angela, if Chieko get's killed...

Carmen: Amit!

Amit: What is it Carmen?

Carmen:  Amit, listen, Chieko probably ran back to the temple garden, where her brother was killed. Let's find her!

Amit: Chodźmy!

Amit (Turns back to stare at Angela): Oh and Angela, we will be having a talk later about your inappropriate behavior.

That's all I have so far what do you think? Also, do you have any dialogue you can imagine happening between Amit, Angela, and Chieko over the incident with the crossbow?