Thread:Koishi-Komeiji/@comment-29570797-20160913174655/@comment-29570797-20160914143507

Koishi-Komeiji wrote: It's good. It has a lot of emotion and deep meaning. Though, the first stanza wasn't that pulling, the rest flowed on quite well. Good to hear that, for I plan on dedicating this poem to some people. Meanwhile, what ways can I use to make the first stanza flow smoothly with the rest of the poem?