Thread:Koishi-Komeiji/@comment-29570797-20160913174655/@comment-29570797-20160914164726

Koishi-Komeiji wrote: I'm pretty sure if you read it, you can figure it out. Okay then, I've changed it into something like this:

Michelle Zuria is a beautiful flower

One that is in a field

A flower that's dead

The very first time I saw her,

Things did not well between us

We were like a fighting married couple

A tear rolls down

It falls from my face

Drop!

Red

The poppy color

It’s like her hair

Just like the poppy’s in the fields

That grew after the Great War

And became a remembrance for those who died

Michelle was a soldier in her own war

Who fought to end an evil organization

Though she paid the ultimate price

Oh Michelle

You will be missed by all

Especially your friends at the Bureau

May you be in peace

And may your body be covered with a poppy

To remember all that, you did

A poppy is on your grave

As a reminder of you

Thank you, Michelle, for all you have done

I will always remember you

Whenever I see a poppy

For you, Michelle Zuria, are my red flower.

What do you think of the new version?