Thread:Joanne Maniago/@comment-29570797-20160821000649/@comment-29570797-20160928141355

Koishi-Komeiji wrote: Sloppy.

I only have one question: Is the main focus of this story about Michelle dying or about Michelle's past or what? I can't seem to decide. That's the thing, while Michelle is dying she's thinking about her past and also wondering about other people within her life besides herself. So hypothetically, it's both. But I wonder on what you mean by sloppy?