Thread:Koishi-Komeiji/@comment-11738-20140906163913

http://criminalcasegame.wikia.com/index.php?title=Gwen_Stanford&diff=115259&oldid=115231

Name is the late Victim's child or Name is the child of the late Victim Name? Why accept Name is the late Victim's Name child? That doesn't sound right to me IMO. Can you do me a favor and read the difference between your revert and the sentence I changed? I shouldn't have to leave a message like this, but I would suggest that you read the revisions to determine which one makes more sense, as the reason why I had to edit is because "Name is the late Victim Name's Child" doesn't sound right in my tastes.

I'm not going to revert, but can you do yourself a favor and read the changes in the link to see which one makes more sense? Thanks.

- Vesther (talk) 16:39, September 6, 2014 (UTC) 