Thread:Koishi-Komeiji/@comment-24032096-20170218131645

Hello. In our last time in the chat, I remember you looked a little bit awkward because Behind the Mask's plot got a Grade 10 readability in the Hemingway App. Wanting to see how skilled I was, I decided to put some of my plots in the App and, while many of them got the desired Grade 9 readability, some others got to Grades 10, 11, and even 12 (*sighs*). The cause of higher grades was specially hard-to-read sentences, as the limit of adverbs and passive voice was never exceeded per my observations.

Now I wrote most of that hard-to-read sentences because I had in mind the idea of being as short as I can (after Vesther's retirement and his long plots), thus writing in one complex sentence what can be written in two or three simple ones. After the aforementioned chat session, I finally decided that I prefer to aim to good readability grades, no matter if the plot can become (a little) longer.

So I am asking for your opinion. Do you agree or should I still be as short as I can?

MaxShadows |  Talk  ♦  Blog  ♦  Contributions  13:16, February 18, 2017 (UTC) 