Thread:NessaTasartir16/@comment-27058073-20160219135602/@comment-24576157-20160219181722

Hi Alex,

Thanks for the input! As you probably know, I detail my edits quite a bit, and I like it when things are organized. Transition is also key. If I were to just leave the Killing Spring events as "The team went to talk to Fatima" and just end it there, then there really isn't much transition to the next case - for example, how would we know that SOMBRA would lead the Bureau to Egypt? As Hamsa was revealed to be a SOMBRA affiliate in the end, I felt the information was indeed necessary (although some people may disagree with me). I try to make the descriptions as short as possible, but also precise at the same time. Eurasia should be straightforward when I get there.

Yes, I do plan on listing the events by continents as SOMBRA has some sort of "cell" in each one. However, if I leave out the case headings (and, again, people may disagree with me on this), then I feel it wouldn't look very organized unless someone would somehow pull it off using italics or something like that.

Then again, right now it's just the Sahara Region I'm doing, so I do appreciate any suggestions, like yours, Alex. I'll be glad to accept any suggestions to improve the page as the plot unravels and just sort them out, see what's best for the page.

I pray you'll have a nice day as well :)

 Nessa  ♫  18:17, February 19, 2016 (UTC)