Thread:Joanne Maniago/@comment-29570797-20161007184306/@comment-29570797-20161118020600

Joanne Maniago wrote: Solon75 wrote: @Joanne

I am sure you meant to say St. Petersburg. I can see Nillo crossing the Baltic Sea and having a meeting. Oops Sorry! The first three chapters and the first parts of the AI take place in St. Petersburg. In the penultimate part of the AI, Jack, Carmen, and Amit ride a ferry to Helsinki, Finland just to talk to Niilo. After that, they return to St. Petersburg and have the party in Marina's chilhood home. Great idea. I the idea of putting Marina in charge of the Christmas Party, it can show that even with her struggling with a corrupt Russian government and her mother issues, she still has a special feel for her homeland and for celebrating Christmas in St. Petersburg. I also like the meeting idea, since the Bureau can be told of a report of suspicious activity  and they decide to show Chief Ripley the report. It may also be a good idea to wait until down the road before having Niilo being told of an international criminal organization, or SOMBRA.