Thread:MaxShadows/@comment-25064703-20160225150659

Hi Max I'm going to reword it ASAP but for now, here's what I do:

a. Keep it short. Remove any emphasizing and any unnecessary adjectives to keep the paragraph short.

b. Go straight to the point. Don't say how the clues were fixed, just say that they found the clue there.

c. Only describe the necessary to the plot of the case and necessary to the plot of the district. If you think an AI leg is irrelevant to the whole district's picture, then it's okay to remove it. 