Thread:Joanne Maniago/@comment-29570797-20161007184306/@comment-24942120-20161110194127

Hello, I'm the anon from earlier - I just remembered that I had indeed made an account a long time ago in another wiki.

Honestly, that idea is a well thought one, kudos to you sir. It clearly explains the reason. It's a good idea to have made Amit's parents 14-16 years old during the time they were sent to Auschwitz. They're at the age where they're mature enough to realize the horrors they were undergoing - no childish innocence that can make them change their views or anything. And to have that experience being made known to Amit, and with his compassionate heart, well, it's a good one. Just shows that even the best detectives are humans with a heart. I like the idea of the racist classmates as well; the story hurts but one cannot simply write a story full of rainbows. Experiences change a person's views, and the idea you came up with for Amit's inspiration to be an officer is great.

It's wonderful, clear and interesting. As Joanne said, it's all good. Good job.