Thread:Joanne Maniago/@comment-29570797-20160821000649/@comment-29570797-20160910160457

Koishi-Komeiji wrote: Yeah. If you pull your writing too long with little-to-no effects that would keep a reader going, then no matter how good it is later on, people might just look away from your story. Gotcha. Could you show an example of shorting my writing into an effective read?