Thread:Inspector Diaz/@comment-31659649-20190123232535/@comment-31659649-20190124003821

Did I write this scene well?

Charles couldn’t believe he lost someone who is like a father to him,the memories of seeing his parents got shot right in front of him and he stands near their dead bodies comes back to Charles’s brain,now Tony is dead,it feels just like Charles lost his parents again, he breaks down,kneeling on the floor, tears coming out from his eyes and drop on the floor,Rozetta kneel down nears Charles,hugging him as Charles cries on her shoulder.Mia comes in and see Tony’s body.