Thread:Tuttifruttichaitea/@comment-11738-20140913032827

I praise you for adding depth to existing suspects in later cases of Pacific Bay, but I might have to fix things a bit because as certain suspects appear in different cases, it's better to describe what attribute he/she had as of what case, because the paragraph gets unattractive if you make the paragraph too long, much like a sentence becomes unattractive if you make the sentence too long. Just my two cents.

- Vesther (talk) 03:28, September 13, 2014 (UTC) 